When I first began preparing my application essays for Sophia University’s SPSF, I was confident I had everything under control. I believed my essays were already polished, insightful, and complete. I thought, “There’s no way this could get better.” Then I met Hayashi-sensei.
Our sessions were only ten minutes each, but they were transformative. In that short time, he carefully dissected my essays, pointing out gaps I hadn’t noticed and pushing me to think deeper. His feedback was always precise yet profound. He didn’t just offer surface-level advice—he made me question my structure, tone, and ability to convey emotion and purpose. It was humbling to realize just how far I had to go to create truly compelling essays.
At first, I resisted some of his suggestions, thinking, “This isn’t necessary,” but time and time again, Hayashi-sensei proved me wrong. He taught me that success in essay writing is not about perfection at first glance; it’s about constantly improving through critical reflection. I learned the importance of clarity, logical flow, and genuine storytelling. He helped me express my multicultural background, interest in neuromarketing, and leadership experiences with authenticity and impact.
Thanks to these sessions, I was able to craft essays that resonated deeply with the admissions committees. The results spoke for themselves: I was accepted into not just one, but two faculties at Sophia University’s SPSF.
Looking back, I’m incredibly grateful for Hayashi-sensei’s guidance. His mentorship not only improved my writing skills but also gave me a new perspective on communication and self-expression. Success truly lies in embracing the process of learning—and sometimes, all it takes is ten minutes with the right teacher to change everything.
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